Group narrative.
In order to create the best thriller with my group we discueed the postives and negatives of my idea of a thriller and their thrillers. We want to make our thriller using the ideas of everyone to make the best thriller we can.
My narrative is the idea of a two people camping in a forest or open field, the attacker keeps showing up in the shadows of the tent. The attacker stalks his victim for a few hours and finally trys to attacker her, but the victim hears the attacker and the attacker then chases the victim. The victim and the killer run off into the darkness and that is the opening scene over.
Positive aspects of my thriller is that there is a victim and a attacker which is conventional to a thriller film. The location i want my thriller to be is a forest or opening field which is also a convention of a thriller, these two conventions are positive and allows the audience to engage into the film and want to watch more. I would use nature sound which would make the thriller seem more realistic and make the audience think that they are in the location with the characters.
However negative aspects of my thriller could be the film, i think it would very difficult to film the shadows of the attacker inside of the tent. Also i think it would be difficult to make the thriller seem realistic because if it is not seen as realistic then the audience wouldn't want to watch more and they wouldn't feel on edge or scared.
Hannah's narrative idea is a young girl in her room, or even a classroom getting ready to go out, or doing her homework. This scene will be constantly interrupted by shots of someone picking up a knife, their feet as they leave the room, the door closing and them moving ever closer to the innocent victim. I would like to exclude all shots of actual violence, replacing them with close up shots focusing on facial expression, and the blood as it drips onto the floor.
I think that this would make an even more ambiguous, enigmatic opening scene as the audience would have no idea about the identity of the attacker.
I would also like to use natural sound to make the scene appear realistic and even more threatening to the audience, building tension and anxiety as the scene unfolds.
A positive of Hannah's narrative idea is that, like all successful thriller films, the identity of the attacker will remain a mystery. As I will only be filming the opening scene, the identity of the attacker will not be revealed, to create a mysterious plot line which will leave the audience wanting to watch more. It will leave open ended questions which, if it was a full length film, the audience would be keen to find out the answers to.
However, the lack of actual images of violent scenes may take away from the tension and anxiety which is built from the enigma.
Although Hitchcock's Psycho was terrifying to audiences during the 60's, now computer generated technology has advanced the lack of violence makes the film less scary to the audience. The tension built throughout the opening may result in an anti-climax due to the lack of violence which is shown on screen.
Amy's narrative idea is a young girl taking a short cut home though a forest/field this is the first convention of a thriller film as the audience will know that this is not a safe place to be alone as it will be empty and there will be no local safe houses to go if something did happen. The girl keeps hearing sounds such as rustling from the trees and footsteps, most of the sound in my idea will be natural but after filming I will consider adding non-diegetic sound to build up suspense. While the girl is hearing these mysterious noises she will be turning around to see what they are but nothing will appear to be making these noises. While the young innocent girl is walking through the forest/field there will be camera shots from behind a murderer watching the girl walk home whose identity will be un-known adding an enigma to the opening scene. As the girl gets to the end of the field and is about to leave the open area the attacker will suddenly appear with other attackers surrounding her and coming out from the bushes leaving her trapped with no escape, no scene of violence will actually be shown and instead there will be close up camera shots of emotions and natural sound of the innocent victim helping the audience understand how she is feeling. The young girl will be dresses in uniform and the attacker/attackers will be dressed in all black showing they are bad and the school girl is innocent and vulnerable. I may add iconography to my scene without showing anything to violent or dangerous as scenes of violence will not be shown after editing.
Positives of Amy's narrative are that it contains many conventions of a thriller film such as an enigma, the attacker is unknown there for the enigma is created in finding out why he is there and who he is. This will leave the anticipating these questions throughout the rest of the scene. Also representation of characters, the good and bad. The school girl will represent the good and innocent who is weak and vulnerable and the attacker will be dressed in dark colours representing the bad. Also sound causing intensity and suspense for the audience making it a thriller. The setting is also a convention as it is unsafe and will build up the audiences anxiety while the attacker is stalking the victim as its ads even more vulnerability to the innocent victim.
Negatives of Amy's narrative are that as the scene will be set after school it will still be light out there for it will be hard to use low-key lighting and create affects which might take away from how much suspense is built up as the scene will not be as scary in day light as all surrounding are visible and there is less enigma. In this generation people expect technology to be able to create gory violent scene which aren't real but as the technology will not be available to us there will be no detailed scenes of violence. This means there will not be as much anxiety built up and could leave the audience feeling mutual and not wanting to watch the rest of the thriller if they had a chance.
This is roberts narrative:
- I would want the film to be set in an old abandoned warehouse with low key
lighting so there can be shadows formed and give an eerie ore within the
building.
- I will make sure the killer has not been seen in the flesh only shadows and
noises until they commit a murder on one of the unsuspected victims.
- The killer would be wearing long black flowing clothes and he is supposed to
be dead but is not and is getting his own back on his town that treated him so
bad during his time there.
- The victims are young college teenagers that are lost in a forest and it
begins to rain but then end up in this warehouse where the killer is. The
victims are wearing prom clothes as their car broke down on the road to their
prom and tried to walk to the prom. The victims are young energetic people one
of them is courageous and the rest are timid and scared. But one victim escapes
the killer but then he finds her again in her town again and tries to kill
her.
- My target audience is mainly teenagers and young adults as I want to set the
thriller at a certificate of 15 as i believe the way we will be making this
thriller it will too distressing for anybody younger the age of 15. I also
believe that anybody under the age of 15 would not be able to appreciate the
film.
- The victims body language are very confused scared and worried but one of
them is the most courageous and not scared, i have used this so the audience
believe he is the killer but it turns out his not. When the victims are killed
their body is mutilated with parts missing.
Positive aspects of Roberts thriller is
that I have good storyline as it flows and gives a good aspect for an audience
to want to watch on. Also i think that the target audience that I have chosen is
the right one as anybody under the age of 15 would not appreciate it enough. Im
going to use a good convention of a thriller which is a violent opening scene
and a killer and a victim.
However negative aspects of roberts
thriller could be the realism of the thriller as I don't know if we could film
it within an abandoned warehouse as it could be too dangerous. Also I believe I
could have used better films as inspirations for my
film.
Roberts inspiration is prom night as I want there to be an
isolated place where the victims are attacked by the killer as this creates more
suspense and tension within the audience as they don't know where the killer is
or who is out there. I also used strangers as my inspiration as it is a very
scary and jumpy film and I would like to incorporate this within my thriller
film as this would make the audience want to watch on to find out what
happens.
After discussing our individual narratives, our group decided we would have a young girl taking a short cut home though a forest/field this is the first convention of a thriller film as the audience will know that this is not a safe place to be alone as it will be empty and there will be no local safe houses to go if something did happen. The girl keeps hearing sounds such as rustling from the trees and footsteps, most of the sound in my idea will be natural but after filming I will consider adding non-diegetic sound to build up suspense. While the girl is hearing these mysterious noises she will be turning around to see what they are but nothing will appear to be making these noises. While the young innocent girl is walking through the forest/field there will be camera shots from behind a murderer watching the girl walk home whose identity will be un-known adding an enigma to the opening scene. As the girl gets to the end of the field see drops her hand bag, she still hears the noises and she starts running, the mysterious man then appears in front of her, he then puts a bag over head, ties her up and starts beating her with a baseball bat this will be our iconography to my scene without showing anything to violent or dangerous as scenes of violence will not be shown after editing.
The narrative is conventional as it has all the contentions of a good thriller film. Our group has the right place for our thriller film to be set because it is in a forest/field where a lonely girl would not normally be seen walking, this makes the audience want to wonder why she is walking on her own in a forest and who's watching her. The iconography that we are going to use for this thriller film is conventional because it means that someone is getting attacked, and the audience will feel bad for the girl getting attacked. Also we have included a unknown masked man in the film this builds suspense in the thriller and it causes a enigma.
Our female victim will have school uniform on to show that she is innocent and it shows she just wants to get home from school because its the weekend and she is going out with her friends. The attacker will be masked because it shows a mystery within our thriller, he will be wearing dark clothes as this is conventional to a thriller film.
The audience will build a relationship with the female victim because they know that she is walking home from school not doing any harm to anyone when an attacker comes out of no where to harm the girl. The audience would feel sorry for this girl as she is just trying to get home, also the audience will be able to relate to the school girl because she is the same age as our target audience.